One day I wore a *new* dress...
I went out *where* the trees grow wild...
I was climbing *one* gigantic tree when..
the *weather* took a turn and..
a strong wind *blew* *by* I fell off the branch
landed on the floor with a thud..
I had gotten a tear in my dress...
scared *to* go home I ran into the deep forest..
there I found a cottage *where* a little old lady lives..
the nice woman baked me sweet cookies and offered to *sew* my dress...
She soon finished sewing my dress and I was on my way home...
I *knew* I was supposed *to* be home *by* *four*
but I also did not want *to* get into trouble *for* tearing my *new* dress
when I had gotten home my parents *were* not there
they had gone *to* look *for* me because they *were* worried
I had gotten kidnapped I called my dad's phone *to* tell him I'm home
When they had gotten home they yelled at me and I recieved *one* month restriction
I now *know* I can not run away from my problems and face them
This one is way better than mine. Mine doesn't even make sense. Good job.
ReplyDeletethis is a really good one
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